I need a little number in the bottom of the page that pops up every time that a made up word come into play. That carriage also wasn’t really drawn there, but at least I did an okay job of photoshoping it into place. Characters eating, now that’s something I don’t depict all that often, but here we have an example of it done rather well. I like for there to be random things happening there in the background and not really pointed out like her eating the pastry. It doesn’t really need to be there, but in being there it adds a lot to the feel of things.