Conceptually I really like the checkpoints and may use them elsewhere one of these days. The architecture is somewhat eastern inspired but it’s not as if I looked at a reference when drawing it. The speech boxes here is something that we see later in the actual comic done a little bit differently. The colors denote who is saying what in the modern comic, that is to say cam’s speech is in pink and ash’s is in blue, I think this does the job a little bit better.