I like the hand gestures used by ash here. Also notice that he has a more pronounced collar on this version of his coat, it’s been done away with of late. I think that the coat looks better without it and it also seems less dressy and better balances with his dress shirt… Though he never really quite tucks in his shirt right anyway. Cam’s hair there I’m not happy with, it looks okay, but really that’s not the style of hair I think she should have. That hair is too typical looking, what with the bangs separated from the rest of the hair, then again I’m most likely looking too deeply into this.